PiVisuals's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[He asked for candy]

Pretty bizarre humor - I know some people aren't fans of the random humor, but I like it. The overall animation was pretty basic... nothing overly complex. Although, I thought the facial animation was pretty solid.

I am wondering why the person on the right was carrying a briefcase. Yet again, considering the context of the short, I suppose it fits in with everything else. Bottom line, I enjoyed it. Good job.

UNP responds:

My willingness to create animations is far more higher than a highest mountain
The only challenge, though
Is my scope of understanding...
Ideas, full of emptiness and random...
The storyline for this particular achievment of mine
Was made up in a time lapse
No longer than a capture of a thief
Caught on king's demand
Again and again I say it once more
I can do better, you'll just have to wait
A day on or of abroad
O_o

[WoT chort funny clip]

Nice - quick and to the point.

If anything, I would recommend in the future using some additional sound effects to better sell the largest tank crushing Heavy tank (and maybe have something to go along with Light tank's small pellet fires). Other than that, nice job.

Capullet responds:

Thank you ) will try for better sound effects in next videos =)

[If It Aint Broke pt.1]

I didn't realize until reading the description that the teacher takes on a different persona when his eyes blink. I like the idea, but perhaps it could have been better revealed with the animation/ sound that he 'transforms' into somebody else.

As a side note, the audio a little low at times. You might want to try to boost it up a little in the future.

I am interested to see the next part(s) - I want to see what happens to Mr. Sanders going forward.

tredaycartoons responds:

thanks for your advice this was an animated proect i did for a customer so followed what they wanted but i thank you for your advice

[Pine]

I enjoyed the style a lot. Plus, the story was great - it was short and to the point, but above all, it was meaninful. Good job!

I am a little confused at the very end - was the Dad not there at all?

dylan responds:

Was who not there at all?

[Ginja Ninja | Ep#1]

Ha ha - identical twins... funny stuff. Good job! The animation is solid, and I like how it jumps into a story right away.

Just wondering, what is Dean? A platypus?

AliensOnToast responds:

He's a brontosaurus :D

[Toilet Zone]

Cool short. The background looks great, and I really like the animation.

While I liked the ending (it was definitely unexpected), I think it would have been even better had the character walked past the sink before 'facing his fate'. In my opinion, it wasn't readily apparent that he opted not to wash his hands.

Still, just a small critique. Overall, it was very good.

loberoso responds:

Thank you, man. And I actually thought about that, and some friends said the same... however I hadn't time enought to try to make it clearer :/
But it seems like it worked... so...
Anyway, thanks for the critique! It's always helpful :)

(by the way... I thought the fact of he put his hands in his pockets would be enough to communicate his wasn't going to wash it)