Hmm... the idea seems interesting, but I am not sure things were well thought out from an execution standpoint. Much of it came off as rushed, and it was difficult to figure out what exactly was going on at the end.
Also, the recording quality was pretty low. It was hard to hear, and it had a very 'echo-ey' feel to it. It might be a good idea to look into your setup for improving the quality - there are a lot of easy fixes to create solid recordings.
With that said, I think with a little more work, there could be something pretty good. Just needs a little more time and effort...
Ha ha. Nice - it was funny and moved along at a nice pace. Plus, I liked the punchline/ slogan at the end. Good job.
Pretty bizarre humor - I know some people aren't fans of the random humor, but I like it. The overall animation was pretty basic... nothing overly complex. Although, I thought the facial animation was pretty solid.
I am wondering why the person on the right was carrying a briefcase. Yet again, considering the context of the short, I suppose it fits in with everything else. Bottom line, I enjoyed it. Good job.
My willingness to create animations is far more higher than a highest mountain
The only challenge, though
Is my scope of understanding...
Ideas, full of emptiness and random...
The storyline for this particular achievment of mine
Was made up in a time lapse
No longer than a capture of a thief
Caught on king's demand
Again and again I say it once more
I can do better, you'll just have to wait
A day on or of abroad
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