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[suicide is cool]

Hmm... the idea seems interesting, but I am not sure things were well thought out from an execution standpoint. Much of it came off as rushed, and it was difficult to figure out what exactly was going on at the end.

Also, the recording quality was pretty low. It was hard to hear, and it had a very 'echo-ey' feel to it. It might be a good idea to look into your setup for improving the quality - there are a lot of easy fixes to create solid recordings.

With that said, I think with a little more work, there could be something pretty good. Just needs a little more time and effort...

[Cheeto Fingers]

Ha ha. Nice - it was funny and moved along at a nice pace. Plus, I liked the punchline/ slogan at the end. Good job.

[He asked for candy]

Pretty bizarre humor - I know some people aren't fans of the random humor, but I like it. The overall animation was pretty basic... nothing overly complex. Although, I thought the facial animation was pretty solid.

I am wondering why the person on the right was carrying a briefcase. Yet again, considering the context of the short, I suppose it fits in with everything else. Bottom line, I enjoyed it. Good job.

UNP responds:

My willingness to create animations is far more higher than a highest mountain
The only challenge, though
Is my scope of understanding...
Ideas, full of emptiness and random...
The storyline for this particular achievment of mine
Was made up in a time lapse
No longer than a capture of a thief
Caught on king's demand
Again and again I say it once more
I can do better, you'll just have to wait
A day on or of abroad
O_o

[WoT chort funny clip]

Nice - quick and to the point.

If anything, I would recommend in the future using some additional sound effects to better sell the largest tank crushing Heavy tank (and maybe have something to go along with Light tank's small pellet fires). Other than that, nice job.

Capullet responds:

Thank you ) will try for better sound effects in next videos =)

[If It Aint Broke pt.1]

I didn't realize until reading the description that the teacher takes on a different persona when his eyes blink. I like the idea, but perhaps it could have been better revealed with the animation/ sound that he 'transforms' into somebody else.

As a side note, the audio a little low at times. You might want to try to boost it up a little in the future.

I am interested to see the next part(s) - I want to see what happens to Mr. Sanders going forward.

tredaycartoons responds:

thanks for your advice this was an animated proect i did for a customer so followed what they wanted but i thank you for your advice

[Lizard Love is Complex]

I like the idea and the punchline. However, I think it was a little confusing. I assume the lizard in the middle thought the other lizard was interested in it but was really digging the third lizard.

One suggestion that might have cleared things up a little would have been to have the middle lizard and the other lizard in the same shot in the beginning to help better set the scene for what's going on.

Still, I think you had a good idea going. Also, I enjoyed the music during the lizard's push ups!

[A Very Merry HMFD Xmas]

Not bad - short, sweet, and to the point. Good job.